Song thingyy!!!/monologue

-I am what I am

wouldn’t have it any other way

People try to keep me down just

cuz I’m not the same

People try to influence me

but my I.D. entity will never change

I’m a beast of a gamer

I pwn at every game

I’m a musician at heart

I practice everyday

People try to change me in

many different ways but my

I.D. entity will stay the same

This is what I am, just try to

understand…..

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One Response to “Song thingyy!!!/monologue”

  1. Randy Depew Says:

    This is a decent start, but I would challenge you to get past the surface to what really makes you tick. For example,

    “People try to keep me down just cuz I’m not the same” What does this really mean. Who? how are they keeping you down? how are you not the same? Without getting into these answers, you aren’t saying anything that wouldn’t be true of everyone.

    Also, I would get away from the term identity completely. The whole projet is already called this. Talk about who you are without saying ‘identity’

    Keep working on it and keep digging.

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